2nd Draft of Short Film

Previous Feedback:

How I used Feedback:

Chloe:

We decided to keep Felix's outfit and agreed with Chloe on her opinion on his outfit. We also decided to completely cut any footage from other sources from our film to make it completely our own.

Jack:

With Jack's advice we decided to keep the blue filter, and even exaggerated it to make to bluer (in part due to Jacob's advice as well). We felt as a team that this reinforced our point, and made it seem like the characters were completely obsessed. We also made an active effect to make the lighting brighter so it was picked up better on camera.

Eleanor:

We filmed the rest of the film.

Jacob:

When filming the rest of the film Ruben effectively managed to maintain his cool, quirky use of the camera. We also did experiment with different filters and as a result came out with this bluer effect.

I have chosen to upload at this stage to gain some preliminary feedback on the way the film is presented and whether the little niches, ie Macy's blue light only coming from her phone. Which numerous members of the feedback panel suggested they didn't like on different occasions.